Thank you

by jescelle   Jan 5, 2005


I don’t cry on the outside,
but my heart bleeds as I write.
my soul is dead inside,
but somehow theirs a light.
I see it clear as day,
you make me smile,
I hear your voice,
this life IS worthwhile.
I love you so much,
you don’t understand,
I love how you listen,
how you sometimes hold my hand.
my dad is gone,
and now you’re here,
I’m glad this is done,
I’m glad the path is clear.
you light up my day,
you make me laugh,
you’ve made me happy,
the last day and a half.
I don’t want to die anymore,
I really want to LIVE!
I really feel,
I have something to give.
something special,
something wild.
something I can give,
not just something from a child.
so thanks dad,
for showing me the way,
thanks for showing me,
that theirs a brighter day.

I love you so much daddy

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  • 19 years ago

    by jescelle

    thanks hunnie

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Wow. Liked it. One of the best ones I've read.

  • 19 years ago

    by jescelle

    your welcome tasha!

  • 19 years ago

    by tasha

    heya hun thanks so much for commenting on my poems you asked if in the poem learn the meaning of the word trust if it was the same guy as in the i want one just to say it wernt it was a friend who did something then denied it to all my other friends thanx for ure comment and this is a really great poem love tasha x x

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    Hey Sweetheart,
    THat was a beautiful poem. ANd of course I'd check out you're stuff! :-d It was written very well, and I really enjoyed it. Ima go read some more now! And, I'm incredibly sorry about your dad. I know what it'sl ike not to have one. If you ever need anything just get at me on AIM... seyxdani54 (it's not spelled like that, but they would'nt let me put s*x on here)

    Anyway, I hope you check out more of my poems. I'm going to try n' read all of yours.

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