Hey, this is really good, and i know how you feel...and this came frum the heart, keep it up! take care hun!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Nice job.. I really liked it. could you please take a look at my poem called "Tired of Trying" thanx

awesome poem, very well written, nice word choice 5/5
-Erica

A heartfelt poem, for of dispair but very well written. Well done.

God! I love reading your poems!

Good poem it went on a bit too long maybe but otherwise it was just fine. Keep writing you are doing a great job.

Nice poem.. awsome work..
Please check out my poem "dry you eyes" it would mean som much to me =)

I gave you a 5.
Hugs

you may not write anymore, but what you write is GOLD, it seems to come from the heart, purly, i'll definatly come back and check out more of your poems (sorri- hafta go)
if you ever start writing again, we'll be waiting!
luv ya kt

Marta I am so sad for you..You have no idea How bad I hate to read these kinds of poems..All though you did an excelletn Job writing this I have to give some comments...I really want to tell you just to keep your head high!! God loves you dear and he made everyone have a purpose to life!! Be strong I know you can!! I don;t know how this sounds coming from a 13 yr old but i feel the need to give you some comforting words!! Stay strong!!

like all your other poem i have read this is great!! your going into my favs!! keep it up!! :)

One word...Wow.

Wonderful job. Keep up the good work.
-Kate

i can really relate to this keep it up and remember although it seems u are you never alone!
lil kit xxx

wow that's amazing, i can really relate to it. keep up the great work

-jenn

GREAT POEM, YOU ARE A GREAT POET...5/5
MUCH LOVE
~*~HEATHER~*~

your a good writer i enjoy your stly... thanks for reading and commenting on my poems it means the world to me.. xox Sherrie

That was good. I know what it feels like to feel alone. that feeling sucks. it really does. 5/5. ps. lk ur name. its my aunts name.