Notice Me!

by Amanda   Jan 5, 2005


It seems impossible for me
To put my feelings into words
I'm in love with a person that I don't even know
Whenever I see him from afar
I fill with intense happiness
But at the same time
It seems so excruciating
For my mind tends to refuse
The depressing question:
Does he even notice me?
I urge myself to try to get to know him;
Get him to know my name
In my eyes he's gorgeous
Not a minor defect in sight
He's perfect
Seems to be the person for me
I'm just asking him one favor
PLEASE NOTICE ME!

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  • 19 years ago

    by sarah jenkins

    I really enjoyed this poem, its very created, and expresses alot of feeling, its very well written, and i personally really like it! but i was wondering if maybe you could comment and or vote on my new poem called "White Silk Dress" if its not too much trouble! Thanks, sarah jenkins!

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