done with my response

um...nice...ya...kracky...um...bye

I really liked this. (have no idea why it was a 2?)
I like how you added the line of
"every passing minute it dies a little"
I think theres alot of hidden meaning in that and is a great symbol when thought out thoroughly
I also loved the last two lines. I love the past tense of a stature of importance then existing in nothing but rememberance
Well done

Good poem! 5.0