damn girl...that is really good...i commented like u asked...that was super good~!~!~! write more like this!!

No, its not true, just a poem i was thinking about kind of based on true events, but both sisters didnt die, only the one in the car wreck did.

Thank you for commenting on my poem "Color Don't Matter"! I really liked your poem "White Silk dress"! Very well written, and touching! Keep up the good work! : ) God Bless!

Sarah:
This is a great! Very awsome the way you broke apart the sentences to fit the parts (THEY CAME OUT GREAT!). You are very lucky to have such a imaginative mind!

♥Jon

i am a twin, and i loved this poem. its so sadly true, or it could be.....especially that part about both sisters dying in a white silk dress.

wow, so depressing and mournful, great writing, keep it up.....just nothing so SAD....made me want to cry thanks for commenting on mine...again very well done

That is a sad poem but really I love it!

Thanx for commentin on my poems!

thank you Chrissy

OMgosh this poem is so sad..is it true..if it is i am so sorry well hey ima go check my poems out love always

I love the story here, and i love the way that this all fits together. If i wasnt so sure, i'd say this was perfect.
Thanks for leaving a comment on my poem ''Dear mr. President" hopefully you'll keep reading my work, because im sure i'll keep reading yours.

Stay strong,
-Courtney-

That was really sad.....im so sorry i hav no idea wut u r goin thru but my ex boi friend got hit by a car and died so i kinda kno wut it feels lik but not nearly as bad as it is for u...keep writing

this poem reminded me of something i was thinking of and it was umping off a cliff and if i was maria i would have done the same thing, great writing
rachel

omg that was soo sad i am seriously crying u r sooo good!!!
~rock on~

o my goodness..that gave me chills!!! i absolutely loved it!! it was written with so much emotion!! i cant say anything more that was supreme

omg.is this true?I am still crying.Good poem but sad story.

That is a great poem. I loved it

This is the best poem i have ever read! it has soo much emotian in it! I LOVED IT! well done keep writing it helps, im here 4 u! mwahzz love maddison, thanx 4 ur comment

This was really tragic...great story, i love how you told it.
good job

Wow! its so nice yet so sad

good job!!!

[shakes head to clear thoughts]

this is so sad.....

Wow...
That Was Like Amazing...
Veryy Sad..
Almost made me Cryy.. =[[
Great Jobb... =]]
Keep It Up..

-SaraBeth<33*