I really enjoyed this poem, its very created, and expresses alot of feeling, its very well written, and i personally really like it! but i was wondering if maybe you could comment and or vote on my new poem called "White Silk Dress" if its not too much trouble! Thanks, sarah jenkins!

Lots of emotion in this. You asked me to check out your stuff so here i am :) thnx for the comments girl!
Take care always,

;;^^Kalah

this poem explains the storry well and with a lot of emotion, great work!

keep it up, lu -x-x-x-

Bad ass I've been through the same situation and I can relate to your poem nothing else but pain and suffering, UHHH!!!!

gd poem, gr8 detail, very meaningful a well earned 5/5!!

It was a good poem I LOVED IT
love ya

ThaNx 4 tha comments!!! LOVE YA'S