dude jonathan thats tight man, i like it alot...--joann<3

I really enjoyed this poem, its very created, and expresses alot of feeling, its very well written, and i personally really like it! but i was wondering if maybe you could comment and or vote on my new poem called "White Silk Dress" if its not too much trouble! Thanks, sarah jenkins!

Hey

This was great!! I really like your style. This had good flow from start to end.

Really enjoyable read.

Kind regards
Hayley