Comments : What I Pretend To Be

  • 19 years ago

    by Lyss is dead

    oh my god. this poem is one of the best I have EVER read. I can totally relate and you are an amazing poet. wow im sooo impressed. I cried. keep it up.

    alyssa

  • 19 years ago

    by Krystle

    This is BY FAR the best poem I have read of yours so far.....I've been practically rendered speechless....wow....all I can say is wow....good work....I would kill to have your talent, excellent excellent job...
    lots of love,
    ~Krystle~ XX

  • 19 years ago

    by Echo

    This is one of your best poems really good i love it!!

    Echo

  • 19 years ago

    by mihara

    that's very good writing and i love this poem because i could relate to it....and i dont know how u rhyme soo many words because i cant be bothered..and thank you for sharing this poem to me...and keep up the good job...

  • 19 years ago

    by inaudible confessions

    Outstanding, as always. i'm sorry you feel like you have to pretend life is good when, in reality, you're truly suffering. i hope things improve greatly in the near future. my best wishes to you.
    always,
    brittany (nothing)

  • 19 years ago

    by *tears*

    OH MY GOSH!!! That was such a GREAT poem. I could relate soo much. It is like you were expressing every emotion I couldn't say or even write. It made me cry!! I am soo gonna add you to my favs!! Please, Please keep writing. Take Care
    ~Ashley~

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    hey that was really very good. i gave it a 5. sorry u feel that way, hope things get better!
    -shannon-

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    Thank you so much for all your comments! They mean so much right now.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kathrynn

    WOW..
    i am very impressed, that is absolutely incredible writing
    i LOVED it
    keep up the awesome work!!
    i love reading the stuff that you post on here!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Nil

    this poem is simply amazing wow is all i can say.

  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    I LOVE it!! keep it up,
    -Mols

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    this is a great poem. I hope ur ok. Im here if u eva need to talk to ne one ok
    Emily

  • 19 years ago

    by Avellana

    argh! wow. *speechless by the amaziness off your writing*

  • 19 years ago

    by Beautifully Broken..*

    UNBELIEVABLE! INCREDIBLE! Best I have ever read...