lmao, this poem was interesting but it was good. I liked it, me personally isn't in to all that rough sex, even though I am kind of a freak, but that is a defferent story lol. I liked it reading, it didn't have a lot of details but that is a good thing to me. Erotic poems to me isn't all that good if there is a bunch of details because somethings should be left up to the imagination. And again I really liked your poem

its stupid...sorry

awesome poem!
sex is just awesome!
-shannon-

lol shannon...thx for comment...and fu__ck you ashley...if you think its stupid...dont read the motha_fuc_in poem bia

It's stupid to you ashley because you're probably only 12.....

Anyway that was a great poem...I agree with the girl who said it wasn't too detailed you left some to the readers imagination. good job.....

lol thx

wow i loved it, sex in the shower is great, lol...5.5

You know amy your effin gay. this is one of the best poems i have ever read. You need to stop sayin shit. Dani i loved it write more. I would love to see!!!

xox Ashmo To The Extreme xox