Very individual! Great work! A definate 5

Wonderful poem. Really put a new aspect of school into my eyes. I love the way that you described it and at the same time, the words flowed off my tounge.

~*~Christina~*~

That's awesome! Really original. Seems like it would make a good song, maybe you wrote it as a song.

Really enjoyed it a 5 forsure!

wonderful poem. thats all i can say~!!~
just great. keep IT up. 5/5

That was so creative, you are a very good writer. I personally liked this poem the most from the ones i read, because the style you wrote this one in was very good. def. 5/5, keep on writing x)
SatuzKa

liked that poem were creative. ur a gr8 poet keep writing ill read some more of ur stuff for sure!

Jacs
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That is about the biggest self pity poem I have ever read in my life. Being your only 15 I will cut you a tiny bit of slack. But the true joke is when you get out and you have proved to all your teachers they could all go to hell. They will see you at the gate little one. Without an education in your life what can you accomplish. I am not going to tell you to get A and B but look at the whole picture you got alot of life ahead of you and with little to no education in your life how many doors will you be closing to your future. Your 15 and still very young but time goes by fast and when your out of school what do you think is going to happen if you don't knuckle down now. Trust me your family can only help so much. Time to belly up to the bar and take responsilbilty now or it will be you that will be winding up like the living dead hating your job and your life because your education put you there. Think about it little one 5 years goes by fast...

Powerful and true *Adds you to my favourite artist thing*