Oh how this tale drew me in!
Your suspense throughout is famous.

Your sage is revealed splendidly for being wise. And the affection between the two charecters was very elicit.

Masterful work once again Miles...

"Flee now for the wood, child, flee for His bower
For none but He can ignite your soul’s power."

Excellant poem, truly beautiful. I loved every syllable.

I really like this one. The first line was particulary captivating, and drew a sense of mystery that simply tugs you in. I think it's about an apprentice of a holy positition.. something like that. I've been trying to figure it out, but my mind's been pretty clouded today... and all I can say is, excellent job.

excellent... on to part II...

You're full of this stuff!! Brilliant!!
Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

I am in complete awe at your writing prowess. Such deep words and such feeling. It is written so eloquently. You are a masterful poet. Wow.

I haven't been reading these but when I saw you had written a part IV i thought i should go back and read the earlier ones, and I'm so glad that I did.
This isn't your usual style of writing (a storyline) but somehow you make it into a work of art anyway. I don't know if this is an expieriment your doing but so far it's going fantastic.
The piece kept the reader entrance with wonderful imagery and a perfect introduction that was portrayed with emotional thoughts set in a beautiful way. I can't wait to read the rest

Beautiful.. written with words of ancient age, beautiful narrative and stunning description.
A flawless poem indeed- a true dark masterpiece.
I loved every word.
WELL DONE!
:-)