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by aLmaRiza Jan 6, 2005 category : Love, romance / lost love
I heard yout told someone you love me so dearly you care for me and cherish me and you'll wait till eternity i heard you whisper to me you'll never leave me alone you'll protect me from all my fears you'll be here till your last breath is gone but then i heard from somebody you've found someone to replace me you love her more than me and yes i know and i can see i heard from her some words telling me to let you go she love you much just like i if i love you still, she wants to know i heard you are to leave now you've decided to go with her you try not to hurt me but the pain as you go i cannot bear
by Lydia O
I meant to add that I would urge you to consider applying standard capitalization in your poetry.
You did a very good job in so beautifully expressing the anguish that love can cause.