by Dark Savior Jan 6, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Come and take a walk with me, take my hand for eternity |
i hope i can be the woman.....hehe |
by Amy
Good poem. I know its hard to believe, but there are actually women like that out there and Im guessing she'll come along when you least expect it. Good luck, keep up the great work. |
by Ann Stareyes
I thought this was an exceptionally beautiful poem. And one day I hope you find the woman of your dreams. She exists, just look and you find her. Great job! Enjoyed! lol |
Unfortunately due to my immaturity, I wasn't able to read the rest of your poem properly after the second line. |