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  • 19 years ago

    by Kailynn Makenna

    Hey this is an awesome poem...i really like... it thanks for commenting on my poems i appreciate it

    xX-Katherine-Xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    I really enjoy reading your poems, they are very indepth....I very much appreciate your style of writing.....

    Kalika

  • 19 years ago

    by Jackie

    Thanks for your comment on my poem....you're poems are really good too and they really touch my heart...

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Everyone gets lonely, once in a while
    like theres no one, not within a mile
    maybe we become forgotten
    when you're on the bottom

    *I like this. It's so true. I love how you express yourself so clearly*

    everyone gets frightened, when they're alone
    A frightened heart bleeds, when you're gone
    when i wish upon the setting sun
    i wonder, how long will i be the lonely on

    *I love how this stanza is more intense than the first. I like how you wished on the sun instead of a star. Clever idea, the sun is the biggets star of them all :)*

    everyone gets sad, upon the rising moon
    and loosing you has came just too soon
    thinking of you and quietly crying
    beyond the light i'm slowly dying

    *Aww this part is sad. I like how you go from everyones pain to just yours. Very creative idea. Nice work. Keep it up. Nik*