Life without you

by Chris Gaetan   Jan 6, 2005


Life without you is a day in hell,
always lonely never well,
Can't forget your smiling way,
when i fell for you that special day.
the excitement in you fades and fades,
The hatred in me begins to engage,
when both meet they explode in a fiery rage,
When it's all said and done, males and females is on the run,
only want what they see in eye,
they could never have our beloved treasured prize,
real love happens once in a lifetime, if twice than your love is a lie,
I'm tired of all my cries and goodbyes,
if we get back together than your love is basically a big lie.
Please vote!!

p.s. I lost this poem but all i remember is the begginning and middle. The end i just made up.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ntv650

    I like this I can relate to it so much. Great work with themes involved, hope to read similar stuff from you. Might want to consider paragraphing into stanza's a little better and perhaps not asking for people to comment :S