by Ann Stareyes Jan 6, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
If I gave you my heart, Would you treat it kind? Would you keep it warm until the end of time?** If I gave you my heart, Would you handle it with care? Would you love it because it was one that was so rare?** If I gave you my heart, Would you hold it as a treasure? keeping it for only you and for your pleasure?** If I gave you my heart, Would you love it in return? Would you love it for-ever and make the flames burn?** I'm giving you a priceless treasure, That can never be sold, It's your keepsake, For you to protect and hold. |
by Harry Bryant
nicely written Starry eyes, yoiu do have the knack to write from your heart, and then you throw in your mind, blending them together to make a great write, keep up the great works, Harry |
beautiful!! wows!! God Bless. |
by HJ
Great poem, flowed beautifully from start to end. |