Avenging my sister

by yinyang22334455   Jan 6, 2005


I just sat there
watching you
you never knew me
but you didn't need to
i wanted revenge
for what you did
not to me,
but to my sister
you took her heart
ripped it up
into pieces that
cannot be fixed
she sits in her room
crying all the time
now I will have revenge
you ruined my sister
I will ruin your life

* this poem is about a girl who wants revenge on this guy for raping her sister *

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  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    good poem. Pain, anger and sadness leaped from everyword that I read.

    I have read some of your other poems, I liked them alot you have a very mature style of writing. Look forward to reading more.

    Check some of my new work if you get chance be interested to see what you think. Thank you for your comment on my other poem.

    Take care
    Hayley