Comments : Shhhh it can hear you

  • 19 years ago

    by Lyss is dead

    wow you're a really good poet. awesome job. thanks for commenting on my poems. Keep it up
    alyssa

  • 19 years ago

    by chitra

    good poem

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    First, let me say that this is just a spectacular use of symbolism and darkly and beautifully put.

    As for what I think it is about, perhaps my opinion is different, but to me it came as the evil that is a part of each of us, for no one is born completly innocent. This to me was the true desires within us that though we know are wrong still exist, and if we feed these desires they shall eentually grow to take over our complete form.

    Anyway, I absolutly loved your symbolism. First of all, the main subject was wisely put and the mournful beast you portrayed fit perfectly with the meaning behind it. I also loved the symbol of the "bell toll" repeated and to "be careful what you whisper"
    intriguing and darkly beautiful. Excellent job

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    Wonderful poem. Beautiful in a way, very dark and great use of words. I think I know what it is but I'll keep that to myself. Good work.