i liked it ... it was very cool i could relate i am kinda like that sometimes or i have at least felt that way before .... a lil suggestion and it's just my opinion so u don't have to change it but the part where it says in a boys heart i thought i needed more than just boy like more meaning cause not just any boy is the nice .... gj keep writing

It's a very simple poem. I like the flow of it, but it's very cliche and not something I prefer to read. Sounds more like a love song than a poem - and despite what some may think, there's a fine difference between poetry and song lyrics. You could have done more with the wording (like I said, too simple), so the mood you're trying to create will be more emotional - deeper.

It's a very simple poem. I like the flow of it, but it's very cliche and not something I prefer to read. Sounds more like a love song than a poem - and despite what some may think, there's a fine difference between poetry and song lyrics. You could have done more with the wording (like I said, too simple), so the mood you're trying to create will be more emotional - deeper.

love it. its really good. nice simple nice flo nice word choice. just wonderful

great poem, very well written, godd job!! please rate and comment my featured poems, thank you

nice poem ...great job i liekd this one. keep it up