by Emilia Jan 6, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
A Note From "Him" : |
I like the first part better...good job with the rhyming. Very nice. |
by No Motiv?
wow...piecy, but effective. at first, i didn't understand the spread out structure, but at the end, i didn't care. Job well done. 4/5. |
by hussain
very nice poem..i likew you u described what happened from 2 points of view |
Hey I liked that~great job, as always, don't really know what to say:/ cept good job! |
by Bredada
sad but i guess he deserved it well like ur poems alot! |