Comments : When im not with you

  • 8 years ago

    by Susie Deagle

    This poem is not written by Rachael...it was written by the famous poet Sara Teasdale and only changed a bit at the end. WTF??? Is this a forum for plagiarized poetry??

    When I am not with you
    I am alone,
    For there is no one else
    And there is nothing
    That comforts me but you.
    When you are gone
    Suddenly I am sick,
    Blackness is round me,
    There is nothing left.
    I have tried many things,
    Music and cities,
    Stars in their constellations
    And the sea,
    But there is nothing
    That comforts me but you;
    And my poor pride bows down
    Like grass in a rain-storm
    Drenched with my longing.
    The night is unbearable,
    Oh let me go to you
    For there is no one,
    There is nothing
    To comfort me but you.

    Sara Teasdale