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by rachel Jan 6, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Spinning always faster Continuing never stopping Not my own life’s master My soul is forever dropping Falling even deeper This hole is eternally black Salvation becomes steeper The evils do attack Spiraling forever underneath Dizzying is my fall Crying through my clenching teeth There’s no one left to call Slipping into the everlasting gloom Running from my pain Hiding from fate’s eternal doom Adding one more stain Scared to feel reality Unaware of what is true Hoping there’s some technicality I don’t know what to do Someone take care of me I can’t handle what I feel knowing no one can see I want for this to not be real Longing for it all to end Afraid to keep on trying until the helping hand that's lend Inside I know I'll be dying *please rate and comment*
by confusion
really great poem,the words flowed fantastically. keep it up and stay strong, lu -x-x-x-
by Knoxy
Hey, this is good hun!! keep on writing, and take care.. ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy