OMG its realllyy good lol. i liked it alott. until my bf i kept wishing my low life ex bf would come back to me. read and comment on my poems plz. thanks..

I do like this poem, but I think again your lines need to be balanced out so that it flows better and makes it easier for people to read. I for one can relate to it, which also helps with viewers and I'm sure alot of people can. Well done, Take care :)

DANG!! This is truly amazing!! Sorry for your loss though..Break ups do hurt yes I know..But things/people that were meant to be will come back to us...And if they don't it only means someone better is coming along!! I am one of those people who believes there's someone out there for everyone and even if things don't work out with this person you wrote about...Someone better is on the way!! Great poem ..i loved the emotion it was so tense!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~