by Tyler Whitney Jan 7, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The unbelievable love i feel |
Thank you for your comment, I appreciate constructive critisism very much. |
by Amilo
I'm sorry, but I'm not sure if I really liked this one... sometimes I feel like you slant the poetry itself to make it rhyme, and the rhymes are a bit cheesy at times, too... but keep working at it to be more poetic.. don't state your feelings or spoonfeed them to the reader. |