Because I Love You

by Tyler Whitney   Jan 7, 2005


The unbelievable love i feel
Not feeling like the third wheel

Not being left all alone
With much affection shown

I love all of it and I love you
Theres Nothing I wouldn't do

With every word I've ever said
Without you i'd be empty and dead

You fill that hold deep inside
By now I would have just died

But you helped me to stay and survive
Keep me here and happy and very alive

So I thank you for it all
Knowing it won't matter if I fall

For you will be right there for me
Until that day I drop down on my knee

And I promise until the day you say "I do"
I will always be there because I love you

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  • 19 years ago

    by Tyler Whitney

    Thank you for your comment, I appreciate constructive critisism very much.

    Tyler

  • 19 years ago

    by Amilo

    I'm sorry, but I'm not sure if I really liked this one... sometimes I feel like you slant the poetry itself to make it rhyme, and the rhymes are a bit cheesy at times, too... but keep working at it to be more poetic.. don't state your feelings or spoonfeed them to the reader.