this is really good but so sad- i was a;most in tears , and i really hope it isnt true. keep up the good work xxxxx

i loved it, i was so mesmorised i didnt blink once, i cudnt stop reading. its so deep, so meaningful and i can tell it said everything you needed to be said. i love ur style and the way u had me so focused on the poem. u have a true blessing for writing.

take care xxx kels xxx

i really liked this poem. it almost made me cry plz keep writeing

thats a really sad poem well more like a suicide leter but all the same gr8 work keep ur chin up best wishes always
luv rach

This poem rules. I don't usually dig suicide ones much but this is very well written.

Thanks Everyone..I Love Readin All this Comments..It Was Set Out In A Suicide Letter Format Kinda But I Think Thats What Makes It More Realastic..I Hope People Keep Checking Out My Poems..It Means Alot And Every Other Talented Wriiter..Keep Writting Everyone.>Mwa Mwa

Thanx Abbbey..Ur Such A Nice Person..I Do Hope My Poems Make Others Wanna Write..And Thankyou For All ur Wishes..I Wish U The best As Well..And I Hope U Do Keep Reading My Poetry..Il be Sure To Check out Urs..Thanx Luv Hails

wow hailey that was awsome i loved it take caree :D
peaceeee