Cold room

by krysten   Jan 7, 2005


I felt traped inside a cold world
6 walls surrounded me like a room
It was like cement
So cold, so hard
no door
Not even a window to let the light in
With cement there is no flame
No heat, so you are cold continuously

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  • 16 years ago

    by january friend

    I don't see why this one has such a low rating, i thought it was really good. i like the way that it's short, anymore just might sound like rambling on. 5/5 ..let's get that rating up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    I like this poem.....it's sad yet it gives me the chance to show you that even when there's no light and no warmth to show you the way, there will still be me; there to comfort you, keep you warm, and show you that there is light at the end of the tunnel.

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