by latin girl Jan 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
It's not like i need you. |
by LostInLife!
hey, your poem was good, kinda sad tho |
This poem has no structure. I like the repitition.. but it seems a tad bit plain. The questions bring the rates up you just need structure. I'm sorry but I think you could work on it just a little more. |