Without you

by joe   Jan 7, 2005


Drowning in my grief,
I'm forced to be haunted by your forever gone presence.

This sorrow felt in my heart burns through till my soul bleeds horror

Embracing your memory,
tears and blood entwine,
revealing I'm alone

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jolene

    it was really deep- it makes you think of so many things- i have been in so many bad situations before...and those few words sum it all up! great job!
    **jolene**

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather Clark

    very unique and creative!!*heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    thank you for the comment!

    ~wow, i wish i could get such a point across in such few words, beautiful...you really have a lot of talent yourself. God Bless~
    Love Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    short but so meaningful. it actually makes me think about so many things. weird how just a few words can put memories inside your mind. wells tomorrow i will email you cuz right now, hehe, i'm supposed to be doing my work but i just had to see if you wrote any new poems over the weekend!

    *Hugs -N- Smiles*

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