awww. this is sooo good
I love this part the best:
forever my deep love she keeps...
i just hope this pain she has caused me doesn't go to deep...

Its so not bad, what r u talkin about?!

<3 jenny

i meant cuz i wrote it in 42 seconds.. lol and iunno.. it just didnt sound very good.. iunno but thanks =)

oh mi gosh! i love it! its beautiful! awesomly writin. keep goin. i think that this is my fave love poem on this site. xoxo lexi oxox