i really like this poem, your feelings are shown really well. completely agree with the point made, great write!

stay strong and take care, lu -x-x-x-

That was definitely a poem..and a great one at that! Just because it is in a format or because it rhymes does not make it a poem. A poem is expression; something that you jot down on a piece of paper that comes from your heart and that's exactly what i saw. This has depth; it moved me. It is a poem and i loved it!