by FTS Miles Jan 8, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
'Sun's demise is sumptuous,' you whisper in the twilight, |
by pinkalias
As the first, intriguing and keeps the story going with a profound poetic narration taking place between characters, which I admire. i like that you were able to use some of the same symbols as in part one and then turn them around to fit for a new scene. The imagery you set is beautiful and implied danger keeps the reader entranced and wanting more. Some lines I admired, |
Absolutely amazing...you have amazing talent. Keep writing, please!!! |
awesome, i love your writing technique, truly an excellent write... |
by FTS Miles
Thank you very much! High praise from such wonderful poetesses! :) |
This sequel to your beloved first is a sensation! The "Mystic" you uphold and even escalate in this next phase compells me to beg a third. |