Excellent...excellent. I love this one...I could feel the desperation...everything was just wonderful about this poem. Great work!
PS: come check out my new one!
lots of love,
~Krystle~ XXX

Omg This one was good i really liked it wow .... Write more like it... WOW ... Its Great ...

Hey, this is really great!! i can relate to this in my own way and u wrote this awesome, keep it up and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy