Whispers

by Adam Murphy   Jan 8, 2005


The days keep passing
but my thoughts are the same
they revolve around her
they whisper her name
I wish i could lie
and say I'm OK
but the tears in my eye
would give me away
my friends say I'm different
they claim that i changed
that my sparkle is gone
and I've been acting strange
I suppose i agree
I'm no longer me
though my face is the same
my hearts ceased to be
at least thats how i feel
with each new day
i spit the blood from my mouth
and continue to play
though it seems so wrong
that shes all I lack
so i have to act strong
and get my girl back..

This is kinda a work in progress..any comments/votes/suggestions are appreciated :D

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  • 19 years ago

    by Adam Murphy

    alrighty then..i shall make it longer, thanx for readin it :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachael/7MidniteTears

    i think that this poem is very good (so far.) i suggest that it should be a little longer. the ending was good. the beat was awesome. the vibe brought an image in my head. great read. i give it a 5

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