by Adam Murphy Jan 8, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The days keep passing |
by Adam Murphy
alrighty then..i shall make it longer, thanx for readin it :D |
i think that this poem is very good (so far.) i suggest that it should be a little longer. the ending was good. the beat was awesome. the vibe brought an image in my head. great read. i give it a 5 |