by chitra Jan 8, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I had a heart wounded with scars |
Not bad! It had substance in it. But i have a question! Why have you submitted with a single space between each line of the poem? It tends to make the poem look much longer than it actually is. And that will make some of the readers quit before reading. I look forward reading more of your poems. Hope i can read them sooner. |