My first "poem" :)

i liked it, the flow and message. u should write more!! good job!

it was really, really good! you really should write more x x x x

Very strange....and of course very confusing.

But I really like this rhyme:

"And covered with leaves in a color of red."

Yayness. Blood spattered everywhere!

I'm kidding....I think. =P

Now please explain to me what this means...

So far I get that you're head is not connected with your body anymore and you're falling off a tree. From a tight noose maybe?

It's always the last two lines of each stanza that confuses me.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

The very last line was cute =P
But I did like the whole poem..
And I agree with Atomic, It sounds like a hanging, is it?
Its a good poem, the flow was good and Its prety sad tho =(
Well done!

Nice poem...