i think that the second line could be changed to "these memories we share will be slow to fade" but besides that i have no other comments, and thats not even really worth mentioning, its great, keep it up

great poem..and killer of time who wrote a comment said they didnt know wat was wrong with it...well there is obviously something wrong with them b/c this poem was great!!

This was an excellent poem! I thought the rhyming was really good and worked well. I dont think it needs ANY work!