I like to find poems on this site where people don't just rhyme for the sake of rhyming. You have helped me find yet another good example of this. A great poem.

Keep Writing.

Nici.

that was really gd keep it up n will u ave a look at mine thanx xxxx

That was great. Through this, I can understand your anger and pain - and so you should feel that. A brilliant poem all in all.

brillant poem, i really enjoyed reading it although it was really sad. i would be really grateful to if you could commetn on mine thanks, keep up the good work