Awwww. Very sweet.. I really liked this poem. 5/5. Take care, Elle x

In My Stomach Ly's A Seed Of Three
Hes Apart Of Us And Hes Apart Of Me

your poem is great, but does this ^ mean shes pregnant?

beautiful and so very true.
~Freak~

Amazing! I loved it!!!! You are truely talented!!! Wow!!!!

Wow, this was really different.. hmm I didnt know what to think .. but I knew it was good.. since poetry doesnt always make sense.. its suppose to leave people thinking.. and i was thinking.. so damn.. you got me thinking now.. and im liking it.. :P

Excellent, you have killed two birds with one stone. You have described so well your love and secondly have shown to the world that color or creed does not matter.

Regards,

Steve

Very good poem.I liked it.

That was a great poem as always. 5/5 I agree with the thing about love being blind. It is sad that people are still prejudice against each other.

This is deep, im glad u r not racist and im sorry if your parents are. im whiute but i HATE reacist ppl weather they r against black of white or pink or purple every1 deserves an equal chance with every1

Wonderful poem but a sad comentary on how far we still need to come with Martin's Dream!!!

Wonderful i loved it

Good luck with your baby.
and no matter what happens...

love.

Good luck with your baby.
and no matter what happens...

love.

Beautiful poem I liked it very much. Dont\'t let no one keep u down and keep doing what your doing. Im a black man also and i understand the difficulties of interracial dating. Just forget the haters cause love is color blind and racism is ignorant.

Good poem I like it

What a truely wonderful poem dealing with racism. I have very racist parents myself, but if I was ever forbidden to date someone of a different race, I'd punch my dad too.

Great work. x

ANOTHER GOOD POEM

OH MY GOD..girl i loved it...5/5 hands down...im bout to send u a pm..