It was okay, it had alot of good parts, but then some could have been better thought it. Good job though. Im impressed by the message that comes out if it.

Rachelx

thanks guys, sure amy i'll take a look!

that poem was really good, it does really make you think, and i know exactly what you ment, some people who used to be in my life showed me that.
xox
Samz~*

i understand what ur saying. I mean u put it in different ways but it makes sense because i know how it feels to feel that way