Natural Instinct

by Ð맆îñ¥   Jan 8, 2005


I’m out here
I’m in the wild
That’s how I like it;
I am the untamed

I creep through the long grass
I see you and wait to pounce
You won’t see me coming
When you do its too late

I strike. I have you in my grasp
At first you are surprised
But I wrap myself around you
You know you have no chance

I rip you bare
I feel your flesh
And now I take you back,
Back to the place I call home

I like to share but you are mine
I don’t want to let go
You belong to me
Stay with me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Girl, You don't deserve 2.2 but now from my help I gave you a 5!!! God Bless your heart! Shine & smile... *5/5*... Ciao!

    *Sedusha*

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Hmm.. first it seems like you're an animal pouncing for prey and you want to devour it. But then in the end it seems like you want to own it as a pet. You switch the tone on and off. Plus your structure is a little off, kinda hard to follow. This poem just needs a little tweeking here and there.

  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    I don't know if it's just me, but in my head it's slightly erotic, and slightly murderous... Good or not, I'm not sure. Its quite deep, and I'm sure there's a second meaning, but I don't think it's what I'm thinking. The rhyming's good, and the description's vivid, I give it a four.

    emma x

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