I don't know if it's just me, but in my head it's slightly erotic, and slightly murderous... Good or not, I'm not sure. Its quite deep, and I'm sure there's a second meaning, but I don't think it's what I'm thinking. The rhyming's good, and the description's vivid, I give it a four.

emma x

Hmm.. first it seems like you're an animal pouncing for prey and you want to devour it. But then in the end it seems like you want to own it as a pet. You switch the tone on and off. Plus your structure is a little off, kinda hard to follow. This poem just needs a little tweeking here and there.

Girl, You don't deserve 2.2 but now from my help I gave you a 5!!! God Bless your heart! Shine & smile... *5/5*... Ciao!

*Sedusha*