Great write hun...so beautiful...just enchanting, i loved it hun...amazing job..love u...xxxxxx <3 xxxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

i like your suggestions and i am greatful for them, though for many of your suggestions on this poem i works either way, and i had actually considered using some of them before but i chose the ones i did over then. though i never though of "me from attaining you an i will consider changing that one" thank you for the constructive critizim

Killer, you're very considered to give suggestions, but really, if it is from his heart, and it could be kept that way, then really, shouldn't he be able to leave it like that? It's an amazing poem, without your suggestions. I know you try to help but you seem very rude in my opinion. It's not really how it is written, and what grammar is right or wrong, it gets the point across, is very sweet, and from his heart, shouldn't that be all that matters?

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Love u Logan.