Abandon

by Sinister Soire   Jan 9, 2005


I hate this feeling inside of me
It’s so strong I can’t stand
Leaving you every single night
For a far off distant dream land

It makes me want to tell you
More and more each time
How much I love you
And how leaving takes my spine

You reside in my heart
And have taken over my mind
You’re the biggest part of me
And you are one of a kind

When I leave you in the night
I really want to cry
It’s this feeling that I’m abandoning
Making you want to cry

I know that’s not what really happens
You urge me to go to sleep
But I can’t help but feel
Like I’m walking out and cheap

I want you to remember
That I am always here
And no matter when I sleep
I will take away your fear

copyright 2005 © Logan Brown

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    thank you Mortalidaga, very well put, i couldent have said it better myself, and about that spelling mistake,, its gone now. thanks for looking into my poem anyways

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    You could be at least a bit more polite, Killer, what he means is, When he goes to bed before me (because of time difference) he feels like he is abandonning me, and it makes him want to cry, and when I know he's going to cry, it makes me want to cry.
    And I tell him to go to bed, but he can't help but feel he is walking out on me (abandonning me) and he feels cheap, because he doesn't want to leave me. Try learning some manners...

    Love u Logan.
    xxxxxxxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    ok

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Awwwww Logan!!! You are just the sweetest little thing!!! Enchanting poem hun, just, wow...I loved it, and I love you!!...amazing, thank you...i love you, and don't think of it that way...I never ever am upset, I understand completely, please don't cry my sunshine, smile your charming smile that makes me melt so deep within...I love you hun, forever <33 Amazing write xxxxxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

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