All alone

by BlackBrokenWings   Jan 9, 2005


Tears to shed from my eyes,
from tonights lonely cries,
i need a shoulder for a rest,
or a hug that is the best,
all alone and no one who cares,
the pain i'm feeling no one will share...

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  • 19 years ago

    by »«¤ß詤»«

    well all i can say is its short but great work! its very meaningful and strait from the heart! love it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    good poem. i liked it. i wish it was a tad bit longer though, i think that you could have expended on the idea, i know that your a good poet, i know you have more in you.

    Look forward to your next peice.

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is good, i can relate to it...keep it up and take care...
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

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