ooo! I love it! I'm soo glad someone wrote a poem about vampires. I think they are soo cool and inspiring! Not that I think sucking blood is inspiring lol. There's just something about vampires that reals me in! I loved it! Great poem!

Your poem was outstanding! I love vampires, and I loved your poem!
read some of mine ok?

that was really good. i liked it alot. you should read some of mine. vampires are very kool. they are the creatures of the night. keep up you work.

I liked your poem. Vampire poems always have I suck blood at night the end. Yours was better.

Nice. Reminded me of 'my disintergrating vampire' by shadowed poet, only totally different. Lol, strange. Still, a good poem.

very creepy... the descriptions are exellent.

O0o0o0.. I LOVE IT! This was brilliant. You chizzled out every fine detail and twisted it all in the end, with painful truth. It was great. Keep it up!!

wow thats one of your best
-Kimi

i think it was awesome. i dont know how you do it but i really want you to continue, i really like readin your poems.

I love this, it's beautiful.
Vampires aren't considered to be beautiful, they are considered dark, unearthly, evil creatures, but in this poem you capture the idea that they really are beautiful, yet still strangely terrifying.
Thanks for commenting on my poem 'Broken Wings' I appreciate it !!
<3 Charli XxX ~*~

wow, this is so enchanting!
it gives you that feel that vampires aren't monsters, their beings like the rest of us, searching the world for a place they fit into

well done. thanks for ur comment too!
<3AsH