by .x.PorteR.x. Jan 9, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
You look down at your shattered feet |
by Amy
omg that was awsum! |
by Leah20
Very nice job, I liked the way that you conveyed your emotion, then only critism I have of this is the one stanza: |
by .x.PorteR.x.
Thanks guys for all the comments i really appreciate them they mean so much to me =) All your poems are awesome too... |
by Kris Lynn
Speechless....that's it....That poem was amazing....it brought tears....I just got 2 speeding tickets....both within the last month. I'm slowing down now. |
This reminds me of watching my uncle and cousin die because a drunk driver felt like running a red light. We still haven't found him till this day. |