Damn parents

I may not know you RL but your parents sound mean. The poem is great though.

amazing poem !!!!! dude logan, i didn't know your parents were that mean !!! I knew your brother was !!! lol, I hate your brother, he's so mean ! hey ! i'll write a poem about him !! lol.
Keep writting ! Love,
E.

This i can relate to. My parents and I never got along....still don't. We talk about once a month just to make sure that everyone is still alive. I know how much it sucks to feel as tho you are the smaller one, the weaker one...trying to figure out what to say but afraid of the consequinces of saying the wrong thing. I know....i've been there. You expressed it all very well in this poem and for someone at such a young age...you show great potential. Keep writing and never give up your faith in yourself....no matter how much you are brought down you can always lift yourself back up.

~*~Christina~*~

awwww. this is soo great! and so completly true!!!!

keep it upp!!
<3jenny

niiiice very nice and very detailed,kinda reminds me of my poems heh,one of your friends said that me and you would be rich if we made a book together lol you should check out my poems.i give this poem a 5.