That was a really good poem. Take care.
~Ashley~ 5/5

hmm violet shut up about the sad poems? i never said for people too. i just said most people aren't depressed. i can make sad poems i if i want too, you don't have to read them. Most of those sad poems aren't really even about me or how i feel. i just have an imagination and tend to use it.

loved it! excellent work! i looooove the last paragraph... amazing!
Fighter
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wow that was a very touching poem, and it was very creative aswell, however it was very sad....it' especially sad how often something like that happens.....

Kalika

Thats really sad, It bought a tear to my eye! Its still totally awesome though. Your writing style is so good! Im getting jealous now! :P Im definately adding you to my favourites.
Take care,
Rachelxx

Wow this is so sad. the last verse was amazing!!!!!!!!! Totally amazing. i loved this it's so touching.

nice poem, like the use of other rhymes to reiterate yours

OMG, that's so sad! you are now probably my favorite author on this site. please continue writing, i love reading stuff from you! keep it up! 5/5

omg you are such an amoazing writer...this has touched me deeply...the ending is very good i hope this isnt true it is so sad..well keep up the good work.. i love all your poems there great!! c ya

Man, Your Writing shit is the best, I loved it 5/5 I LOVED the nursery rhyme. Great Stuff.
-I'm Nobody & A Nimrod

That hit deeper than expected. So many people think I have no emotions and feel nothing when in reality I just cover it up. I feel more than most people but I've had to keep it covered up.