I liked this one, but its depressing. Wich is good on your part, because you want your readers to feel the feelings of the poem. Great job.

-Courtney-

wow that is really good. is it a tru story?

OMG!!!OMG!!!gr8 poem..luuuuuved it!! hey can u chek out sum of my poems IF you have the time to/
byezzzzzzzz and once a agian this is really a GR8 POEM!!!!