Hey i really like this... sounds like some of my darker stuff....
Love Brittany

Hey i really like this... sounds like some of my darker stuff....
Love Brittany

Great rhyming and rhythem. Beautiful piece of work.I liked this part a lot:

"My bullets of guilt have pierced to kill me
My insecure soul has passed me by
Everything I wanted to become I will never be
I am unable to have relief and sigh"

Very well written. 5/5 definatly

hey, great poem!! Its so deep... if ya ever need anyone to talk to talk to im here well keep up the good work and hope everything goes well for you... you mite wanna check out some of my poems

Hey, this is really good...keep on writing, and take care ....
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy